Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

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Jed Wyler

Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

Post by Jed Wyler » Mon Feb 10, 2020 10:08 pm

Oh Chrissy Chrissy
Where have you gone?
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You look like a mong
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You're bit of a tit
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You smell like fresh shit
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
It's nearly the end
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You massive bell end :yank:

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Re: Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

Post by ChrisMuttonshutter » Sun Feb 16, 2020 5:03 am

I heard your cries fucktard and I am back for a short respite.
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Re: Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

Post by Observer » Tue Feb 18, 2020 8:50 pm

U seem upset m8 :smile:

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Re: Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

Post by Guest » Wed Apr 01, 2020 8:22 pm

Jed Wyler wrote:
Mon Feb 10, 2020 10:08 pm
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
Where have you gone?
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You look like a mong
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You're bit of a tit
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You smell like fresh shit
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
It's nearly the end
Oh Chrissy Chrissy
You massive bell end :yank:
Lol 100!

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Re: Oh Chrissy Chrissy part 3

Post by ChrisMuttonshutter » Thu Apr 02, 2020 12:54 pm

Not the best of poems ( and I say that loosely ), it seems to be a rehash of the other attempts.
Your punctuation is sadly missing, hence you do not have the emphasis on certain words that are crucial to the text.
Rhyming the two words, end, is rather silly and somewhat lazy.

Good try but don't give up your day job.
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